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字数：300 满分：100分
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
being far-insight money is not everything, but without money, we can do nothing. so we should save money to live a stable life. when i was a middle school student several years ago, each week i had a fixed meal fee. at the very beginning of the week, i felt i was rich. therefore, i bought something i had never to eat that i wanted day and night. i bought something is attracting my eyes but had no useful for me. i bought some things like snacks, ice creams and so on. i knew they can not make me full. then at the last days of that week, i had little money to pay for my meals, so i had much hungry time. another thing, if i had much money, i would buy many things in random. as a girl, so i am always impetuous to buy some clothes, but after i get them, i found i didn't like them. but when i found a favorite one, i had already had no money. through my experience, i should say saving money is more important. and we also should spend our money in plans.
