小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达不够丰富，学术词汇方面要多累积；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

We have a new teacher, she teaches us English,she is from another province. she is a beatiful and tall women, her voice is very soft. She has blond hair and two bright eyes. she often wears shirts. she is good at dancing. She often plays badminton and does yogo in her spare time. she likes to travel both summer and winter holiday. she has been to many cities. she often told us the story which happen in her travel, that't very interesting and exciting.