小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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We have a new teacher who teaches us English.she is from another province. she is a beatiful and tall women, her voice is very soft. She has blond hair and two bright eyes and often wears shirts. she is not only good at danceing but also good at playing badminton and doing yogo. she likes to travel both summer and winter holiday. she has been to many cities. she often told us the story which happen in her travel, that't very interesting and exciting.