雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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Regarding travelling to other countries, it should be a double-edged sword. From positive perspective, more people choose to go travelling abroad, that means, the level of our life quantity is higher and also can balance the domestic victors flow rate, especially for some travelling places, the sellers provide unreasonable price for victors, hence, this approach can avoid this kind of occasion. However, it also has the negative effect, travelling abroad is not common for almost people. You need to prepare sufficient money and exchange to foreign currency in advance. The most important is that travelling abroad will put the tourist industry for the foreign countries in motion and decrease the income for the domestic travelling industry. To sum up, due to reduce the impact for the demestic travelling industry, as a citizen, we need to take this into our consideration. It doesn't mean that we could not be able to go abroad, just to balance the travelling abrod and domestic travelling.