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A contemporary common phenomenon having been vividly depicted by the cartoon above is that a variety of cultures which is on matter from the east or the west,literature or science or art have been mixed and shared.In this picture,a enormous boiling hot pot abounds with all kinds of cards with different words,such as "buddha","KongFu","swan lake","Beijing Opera","Einstein","Shakespare","Laoshe",and so on.And what is writed on the drawing below is that,"cultural hot pot is not only delicious but also nutritious. There is no doubt that the conmunication and intergration of various clutures can make life richer and more colorful,And even promote the harmnious development of the world.Why does the phenomenon arise?Fist at all,the great progress of science and technology has brought convenience to the clutural share between those who are from different place.Secondly,with extensive interests, people are willing to explore different knowledge instead of merely being satisfied with what they are familiar with. As far as I am concerned,we should study different clutures to broaden our horizons and increase our kownledge.Moreover,we may discovery what we are turely interested in by involving in various cultures.In a word,it's a inevitable trend to share and accept different cultures.