牛津英语八年级第四单元测试考试作文及范文

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Last weekends, I visited to Beijing Animal Park. There had many visitors,they give food to monkeys, played with tigers.Animals are good friends to human, we must be kind to animals. Very important to protect the environment against pollution, please don't threw any rubbishes in animals park.Knew important to protect wild animals. It is because protect animals exactly protect ourself.