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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(41):乘公交车与骑自行车

发布时间:2013-07-31 17:52浏览次数:3225
要求:
学生上学通常有两种方式:乘公交车与骑自行车。两种方式各有特点。请你以“Going to School by Bus or by Bicycle”为题,按照以下要点写一篇英语短文:
乘公交车:节省时间、节省体力
骑自行车:锻炼身体、灵活方便
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Going to School by Bus or by Bicycle
There are basically two ways to go to school.
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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇,但请加强单词拼写的检查。

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Going to School by Bus or by Bicycle Every day there are many students go to school.Some of them may take buses,because it can save time and they can get to school on time. Others may ride bikes to school. Riding bikes is a good way to exersise our body.And it's much more convenient than take buses.But take buses can stay strengthen,which is better than bikes. For me, I like riding bike.I like the feeling of the soft wind blows my face when I ride bike.Just like mother foudles my face with her hands. And there is another reason for me to ride bike.Because it is moring when I go to school , there must be many transportations on the rode,which may cause traffic jam. So I can ride my bike throngh the car current quickly. In a word, There are basically two ways to go to school.

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