2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦40:My Favorite Festival

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I'm very happy hear you are interested in Chinese traditional festival especially spring festival.Now Let me tell you some information about this festival. Spring Festival is most important festival in China.It's in Jun 1st in the moon date.It has a long history more than 5000 years.In this day people will wear their new clothes and go to their parents' house.Then, they have a big meal with each other who are in this family.The most welcome color is red, which means good luck and success.Consequently,you could see many style in street.Children in this day can get much candy and money form their parents.So,they are very happy. Before Spring Festival,people should do many things such as buy some food and clean up their house.Only in this way can they spend a comfortable and happy festival.It's all about that. Expecting to hear form you as soon as possible and give my best wish to you.