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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇，以及部分学术词汇，单词拼写也要仔细。
Campus is a cultivated place,where students communicate with each other who come from various cities to make a kownledge of diffrent cultural , togther with abtaining skills as well as knowledge. However,sometimes it is noticeable that campus tends to be hopeless.so it's no doubt to creat a green campus. A green campus no only directs at graceful setting,but also is intended to harmonious atmosphere,in which students can be attented to study and get along with each other friendly. To creat a green campus,both students and leaders should make efforts to overcome difficulties at hand.As far as I am concerned,the whole campus should fight with great determination and courage until the violence is driven off.Among other things,taking little of other people and being always indifferent to others' sufferings is out of question to lead to conflicts between students.So students should by no means control their emotion and learn to tolerant others,despite all kinds of collision and challenges.
