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题目要求：
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解：
题义理解上有那么一点难！但是总之都跟广告有关。
可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；全文结构较为严谨；文中能较好的使用一些学术词汇，不过单词拼写方面要继续努��。
In modern industry, advertisment plays an important role of attractting public attention and spreading the information of products. Successful advertisment eventually let poeple spend their money and have the product. Some people think that advertising have made too many similar products being selled to the public, which makes us look similar or even behave in a similar way. For example, before smart phone is being introduced, there are plenty of topics to talk or things to do when people get together. But, now the picture is quite the opposite. When people get together, they usually stand or sit there still, garbing a smart phone in their hand and rubbing the screen up and donw without event a saying a single word. This situation should be attribute to the advertisment. I am quite disagree with such point of view. Because the purpose of advertising is just to make poeple know the product and persuade them to buy it. It is the customers themselves who finally decides whether they are going to have one or not. The root cause of making poeple similar is the similar products not the advertisment. In my opinion, the only problem of advertisment is that it is so creative and successful which let too many products being selled by innocent pople that is never going to be used. This finally causes unnecessary resource waste. Therefore, in the light of this, excessive advertising should be discuraged.
