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Our House Hello,this is my parents bedroom.It is big .Hi,this is our living room.We often watch TV and play games here.This is our bathroom.We take a bath here.This is my bedroom.It is small buttidy.I like is very much.This is our kitchen.It is nice and clean.We have our meals here. This is our house,it's so beautiful.I like it very much!