福建仙游县承璜第二学校2012-2013学年八年级上学期期末试卷作文试题

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In 21- century, the internet was alredy popularize in the world. The internet we can use to search something we want and we can talk about any things in the world. But internet also had some weak point, that's is someone will indulge in internet gaming or use internet to 'hacked'. Internet inuse by someone will take damaged to us. We must use internet properly. Didn't use in another harm.