福建仙游县承璜第二学校2012-2013学年八年级上学期期末试卷作文试题

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

In 21- century, the internet was already popularize in the world. The internet we can use to search something we want and we can talk about anythings in the world. But internet also had some weak point, that is someone will indulge in internet gaming or use internet to 'hacked'. Internet in-use by someone will take damaged to us. We have to use internet properly. Didn't use internet to harm.