福建仙游县承璜第二学校2012-2013学年八年级上学期期末试卷作文试题

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，注意文中有较多拼写错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

In 21- century, the internet was already popularize in the world. The internet we can use to search something we want and we can talk about anything in the world.Thought the internet has usefull but internet also had some weakness, that is someone will indulge in internet gaming or use internet to 'hacked'.For Example, we can use internet to attack nearby neightbour's computer. Internet in-use by someone will take damaged to us. We have to use internet properly. Didn't use internet to harm.