福建仙游县承璜第二学校2012-2013学年八年级上学期期末试卷作文试题

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In 21- century, the internet was already universal in the world. The internet we can use to search something we want and we can talk about anything in the world.Thought the internet has use-full but internet also had some weakness, that is someone will indulge in internet gaming or use internet to 'hacked'.For Example, we can use internet to attack nearby neighbour's computer. Internet in-use by someone will take damaged to us. We have to use internet properly. Didn't use internet to harm.