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2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:24浏览次数:3552
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题目 Creating a Green Campus
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1.建设绿色校园很重要
2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……
3.为了建设绿色校园,我们应该……
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作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是学术词汇使用较恰当;文中从句数量过少;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。

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Nowadays,campus construction has been brought into focus. According to a survey,almost all the schools and colleges are rebuilding their campus: not only the teaching buildings but also the circumstances. In this essay,I will discuss the importance of campus construction and offer my own view on it. A lot of efforts have been made to better the campus environment,in particular,the construction of a green campus. Many colleges have taken serious measures to build environmental friendly campus,such as lawns,artificial pools,and tree-lined roads. However,in my view,this is only the initial step and we can do more. To begin with,the schools and colleges may implement strict regulation of waste on campus: no matter the leftovers in canteens or the litter in classrooms. Moreover,on the student side,we can use green bags instead of disposable plastic bags and use more recycling chopsticks and bowls. In addition,the most important thing for everyone is that we should raise our awareness of environmental protection.

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