福建仙游县承璜第二学校2012-2013学年八年级上学期期末试卷作文试题

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

In 21- century, the internet was already universal in the world. The internet we can use to search something we want and we can talk about anything in the world.Thought the internet has use-full but internet also had some weakness, that is someone will indulge in internet gaming or use internet to 'hacked'.For Example, we can use internet to attack nearby neighbour's computer.In addition, We have to use internet properly. Didn't use internet to harm.