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新目标(Go for it)版初中英语九年级-Uint5 单元测试写作:有烦恼向谁说?

发布时间:2013-06-26 18:03浏览次数:4644
要求:
提示:假如你叫王平,参加了学校的”有烦恼向谁说?”的调查活动(a survey)。


调查结果:

1、大多数向同学、朋友说(理由:年龄相仿,容易交流和理解)

2、一些向老师、家长说(理由:经验丰富、可以得到帮助)
3、少数自己独立解决(理由:不愿与人交流,难以与人相处)


请你根据中文提示用英语给某报社编辑写一封信(信的开头与结尾已经给出),说明情况并提出你自己的观点。字数60-80词左右,不必逐句翻译,可适当发挥。


Dear Editor,

I am a Grade 9 student. Recently we have made a survey ----”To whom do you go when in trouble?” Here are the results.
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Yours Sincerely,
                                                                  Wang Ping
用户的作文(系统评分63.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;从句不足,简单句比重高;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

用户练习作文:

Dear Editor, I am a Grade 9 student. Recently we have made a survey ----"To whom do you go when in trouble?" Here are the results. First,Some students will talk to their friends and students. It is because their age not more or less the change.So that is easy to discuss. Futhermore,Some students will talk to teacher and their parents.That is due to full in experience.Therefore we can take some help with them. However,such some students will solve themselves.Not what, it's just wantn't talk with who. This students will feel hard to discuss with people. Yours Sincerely,                  Wang Ping

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