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Football is my favorite sport. I play football with my friends in spare time. I had never played footbalL before 10 years old. I picked a football on my way home in some day and took it into the school. My classmates were very excited and played it after class. Although it was just a ball, but it need our teamwork to make the ball into the net. After then, i love the football deeply. we often do excise and make a competion. B is my most favorite football star, i wish i would be a professional football player.
