高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累；请增加词汇量的积累，请注意积累词汇量；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

In the past ,my hometwon has a lot of trees,there was very green .Many fish in the river,they sang and dance,they were enjoy themsleves.The buildings were very simple,the streets were short and thin. People were poor. But now.My hometwon has changed a lot !A lot of tall buildings are built by workers.More and more cars are drave on the streets.The enviroment is destoried.Trees and fish get less.Projecting the enviroment is the most important!