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I have a good friend. His name is Ruirui. We grow up together and we never fall out.I know that's unbelievable. He is always friendly to everyone ,even the people he doesn't like.He likes cooking and singing. Sometimes he invites his friends to his apartment and cooking for them. To be honest, I like the food very much, it tastes really good.