2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；衔接成分很少出现，文章结构欠严谨。

It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. This is a very interesting topic. For adults,the eggs usually mean money,time,energy or something you have.The basket usually means work,family,safety,progress and such things. Here,I mentioned eggs as time and basket as work. Will you put all your time to work?That depends.We all have different personality.Some people are brave.They have the strong desire to get something.So they choose to put all eggs in one basket like my husband.But for me,this is not this situation.I am not that kind of person.I want to live a balanced lifestyle that I have friends,kids,work,parents and so on.I absolutley couldn't put all eggs in one basket.But I have no choice.That's all.