一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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Today is really a busy day.I help my mom doing housework.I do my homework.I go to play pingpang with my friends.In the evening,I watch TV for about an hour. What a busy day today is! What a busy day today is! What a busy day today is! What a busy day today is! What a busy day today is! What a busy day today is!