高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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I am into football.I am a football fun.Once opon a time,when i went back home from school,I fond a foot ball.Then I play it with my friends.From then on,I fell in love with football.I always do ecercise and attend competition with my classmates.My favorite football star is BKHM.My dream is to become a professional football player.