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托福独立写作模拟题:大学是一生中最重要的时光

发布时间:2013-05-16 14:30浏览次数:1407
要求:
Directions: The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.
Question: Read and think about the following statement:The college years are the best time in a person’s life.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.
题干讲解:
本题要求考生通过定位,概括和分类仔细审题,就某个问题写一篇感想,或就一个事件进行阐述,解释以及论证自己的观点,列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。
观点提示:
1、 大学里是学习可以谋生知识的最好时机。
2、 大学里是交朋友和发展亲和力的最佳时机。
用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
评语:

文章学术词汇表达灵活,但存在拼写错误较多;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;复杂句采用很棒。

用户练习作文:

Being a contraversial issue, the importance of college years to a person is highly debatable. From my own perspective, the college years are the best time in a person's life. In the following paragraphs, i will display some reasons. First of all, college years are the best time to gain useful knowledge. People choose their majors in colleges in order to learn the knowledge that is useful to the area they work at in the future. Students have already learned the basic knowledges in the past 12 years, they can seek higher level knowledge during the colledge years. Besides, they can learn how to aplly those professional knowledge in their work. Also, colleges apeal the best professors from all over the world, students can enjoy the highest education quality in the colleges. Secondly, college years are the best time to store human resources. College students have their own mind and they will enter in the society soon. The friendship they build with other schoolmates at this period is more likely to remain in the future compare with those friends that made before they mature.For instance, if one made a friend in the last years of middle school, after 4 years, A is going to accept higher education while B is going to be a waiter, in that kind of situation,it's hard for A and B to develop many topics because of the circumstance they stay in are totally different, and this may affect their friendship negatively. By contrast, a college friend has many common language with you and will enter in a similar level in the society, what you can gain from him or she are not only the friendship but also some potential benefits, like give some help in business. From the analysis above, college years are the most significant years in one person's life span.

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