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There are a lot of good taste food in Chengdu. It be known as good taste food country. There are enormous good taste food in restaurant. But I am prefer to have dinner at home. First , I am eat food better clean and safety at home. Second, I am eat food better save money at home.Thirdly, I can enjoy family warm eat food at home. In conclusion, I fell eat food more safety more cleaner and so on. I am continue eat food at home.