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下面是大明写给他的朋友Tom的信，信中描述了他的烦恼。请你以他的朋友Tom的身份，给他写一封80词左右的回信，在信中指出他的问题并给他提出建议。信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Dear Daming, I know your problem. You’ve made two mistakes. First, you used your classmate’s pen without her permission. I think it is very bad. You can think about her, if your favourite new pen have broken, what will you do? Second, when you broke the pen, you didn’t tell her the truth. Yes, you must tell her immediately. If you tell her the truth, perhaps she’ll be angry with you, but at least you’ll prove you are honest. She will excuse your mistake. Then I think you should offer to pay. You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen for her. She will realize that you’re truly sorry. Maybe she also angry with you, but as time goes on, she will excuse you. I hope the advice can help you. I’m sure you will make up with her soon. Hoping things getting better and you should not do it again. Yours, Tom.
