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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71661
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;文中句子偏简单,可增加从句使用量;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织;请注意分段。

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My cherish friendshipEvery one need friends,me too.Beacuse friends can give your encouragement to overcome the difficulties and lend a brightness to your life.Sometime,you must be grateful to them.Many people forsake his friends in favor of money or power.That's absolutely wrong.You should know that money and power are temporary and that friends are everlasting .That shoule be everyone's creed.To me,without friends,I am nothing.There was a time when my life was broken-hearted.My friends gave me in large quantities sympathy ,joy and love------things that saved me.Then,I was aware that I was so blessedness and lucky!I owe my friends many kindnesses.How can I repay them?But,I understand they don't need me to do that.In my opinion, this is ture friendship and i really cherish it.

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