高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累；文中有较多拼写错误，请作者增加词汇量的积累；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

I used to live in a small near a river.There were lots of trees around it. The river was very clean.There were lots of fishes in it.People were poor and work hardly.Now days,there are lots of cars in the street.The envirament trued more and more bad.The trees tured more and more few,and the fishes in the river are all died.Its important for people to exchange the envirament