2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Friendship What does friendship mean? There is no single answer.Every one need friends,me too.Because a life without a friend is a life without a sun.Sometime,you must be grateful to them.When you lose your way, friends guide you.When you were happy, your friends laugh with you; when you are sad, your friends feel to sad; if you have trouble, friends will help you solve. In my opinion, this is true friendship and I really cherish it.