文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。
Many people ask what happiness is. I don’t know why there are many people asking this question, because I think happiness is simple.As for me, I feel happy when I do a good job in my study. Teachers praise me and my parents are happy.Or, when I help others I feel happy.I am proud of myself.Besides, playing with my classmates or friends is happy too. We always have a great time together.That all,I think there are all happiness.