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Xiaohan is my best friend. She has a round face and large eyes. She is tall and rather thin. She is a beautiful girl. I always call her ''Doddess''. At school we always played and studied together.She is very enthusiastic friend,always taught me to difficult question. I really appreciate our friendship,so,I hope friendship can auld lang syne.
