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2012年6月9日雅思大作文真题:新闻与人们生活的关系

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:51浏览次数:2679
要求:

【题目要求

Some people think news is in no connection with people's lives, therefore, it is a complete waste of time to read the news in the newspaper or watch TV news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【题目翻译】

有些人认为新闻跟人们的生活关系不大,因此,读报纸或看电视新闻完全是浪费时间。

你在多大程度上同意或不同意这一观点?

【题目关键词】

1-news

2-in no connection with

3-a complete waste of time

4-read the news in the newspaper

5-watch TV news

【写作小贴士】

此类题目是典型的argumentative essay/report,可以遵照双边类文章的写作模式,也可以按单边类方法写作,建议单边写作,现从read news in the newspaper和watch TV news好的角度着手,首先,Reading news in the newspaper or watching TV news give families something to bond over. Both newspaper and television have led to some great conversations. Often, talking about something that occurred in a newspaper or TV show will lead to discussions of real life situations. If this is not a benefit, I do not know what is 。其次,News in the newspaper or TV news are both educational and in formative. News can be as educational as going to school。最后,We can learn about different people and places. Newspaper or TV news opens up the world, whether through watching TV news or newspaper news with multicultural characters!

【写作语汇一览表】

1-inculcate a great habit like reading in someone

2-become a passion for someone

3-one’s perseverance of this trend

4-the mounting pressure of work

5-keep someone engrossed

6-introduce someone to the different cultures around the globe

7-give you a glimpse into other cultures and places of the world

8-reduce boredom

9-break the monotony of a lazy, uncreative and boring life

10-explore a new world filled with information and ingenuity

11-make your vision blurry

12-for a wide variety of reasons

用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
评语:

从句使用稍显不足,注意个别句子错误;文章层次较为清晰;文中较丰富地使用学术词汇,但单词拼写错误较多。

用户练习作文:

Today, news industry is becoming incresingly well-developed. News papers and TV stations have a variety of sources to get the latest information from all over the world, They also have a plenty of ways to spread news to the public. It seems that we are surrounded by the news all the time. However, we need to notice that news generated by news papers and TV can rarely attract people's attentation today. Someone complained that the news is not as useful or attractive as it used to be, some of them even refused to watch them any more for it is a complete waste of time. From my prospective, I don't agree with the above mentioned viewpoint. Because the primiary goal of news industry is to attract public's attention. However, with the development of communication technology, more and more information is being sent to editors which increases the workload of them to distinguish good information from bad ones and leads to the generation of poor quality news. In the same time, people's apetite is becoming more and more diverse, they need more suprising news rather than ordinary one which inevitabely increases the contradiction between readers and editors. One way, in my opinion, to solve this situation is to devide the focus of news, and let the right topics delivered to right people. Therefore, requiment can be satisfied more properly.

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