雅思写作范文:城市交通问题

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The traffic problem in the cities is very heavy.there are many reasons result the traffic problem. First of all,the road system itself has some problems,so the road results the traffic. secondly,there are more and more private cars in the cities, so the traffic problems become heavier and heavier. In order to solve traffic problems,the goverment should plan well about the road system,and they should encourage citizens to take buses rather than cars.