2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowaday online shopping becomes a popular activity.It depends on the develop of the internet. As long as you surf on the computer ,you can make the buy order everywhere. It appears some web platfrom like the taobao、amason、dangdang. The online shopping makes people buying thing easier and faster. As long as you click what you need on the web and then pay it ,you would recieved the goods by the logistic.You can compare the price in diferent web,until you fnd out who is the cheapest seller . It has many good things,but it also has many problem.For example ,if the buyer doesn't realize the detail of good,it is easy cheated by the seller.It has many fake thing on online shopping, and the buyer can't easily recieve the compensate.The law hard to protect the buyer. In my view, online shopping is trend of the human live,but it need to complete the seller protect systerm.It make the seller buy thing on the web safety and happy.