作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。
As the rapid development of the society, mang people become more and more ancious.They always get conclusion upon looking or listening something.On my part,it is so unwise.The reasons are not far to seeking. First of all,the thing itself would be wrong ,then we will make the mistake.Something we see and we look is incident it is correct.So we should think a lot before we get conclusion. Then,if we do as this,we will be considered as a very stupid man.Without anaiyse,we can't make proper decision,then we may loss the oppotunity to know the turth.. Last but not lest,something we see can be a little part of the whole thing ,if we get conclusion very earily,we may judge differently.And even get the incorrect answer.
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