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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40891
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意。

用户练习作文:

As the rapid development of the society, many people become more and more anxious.They always get conclusion upon looking or listening something.On my part,it is so unwise.The reasons are not far to seeking. First of all,the thing itself would be wrong,then we will make the mistake.Something we see and we look may be incorrect.So we should think a lot before we get conclusion. Then,if we do as this,we will be considered as a very stupid man.Without analyse,we can't make proper decision,then we may loss the oppotunity to know the truth. Last but not lest,something we see can be a little part of the whole thing ,if we get conclusion very earily,we may judge differently.And even get the incorrect answer.

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