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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Dear sir, I'm hubin. I knew the new product 5670 of your company during the exhibition in NEWYORK from 15 to 22 in December. I'm very interesting in it. Could you sent a price list and intruction to me? Thanks very much for your cooperation. We wish establish buiness relationship with you. Thanks. yours. sicerncely. HUBIN
