2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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As we all kown, online shopping is become popluar and useful in our daily live.Some people think it is a good thing for us such as online shopping can save our time ,money and very convent.However,other people support difference view that online shopping is bad for us ,at the first online shopping it can't sure the quilce of the good then it can cause case In my view,a coin has two sides,online shopping either.We should hold a right view on it.In the one thing we should let the good side is useful for our live in the other thing we should aovid the bad side.If we can do it,i think our live will become more and more better.