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2012年7月14日托福独立写作真题附范文:寻求考试帮助

发布时间:2013-06-06 13:12浏览次数:508
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for your friend to ask you for help (suppose you are good at the subject) than to turn to a tutor when he finds it hard to pass an examination.
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If I have a friend who is good at the subject,I will go to ask him or her for help.On the contray,I won't find a tutor.To find a tutor have to cost money,what's more,it is difficult to find a good tutor.Tutors are also busy with their schedules,and sometimes they might not give u a complement teaching and guiding.Tutors are not like friends,we can ask for help from frineds by random.

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