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If I have a friend who is good at the subject,I will go to ask him or her for help.On the contray,I won't find a tutor.To find a tutor have to cost money,what's more,it is difficult to find a good tutor.Tutors are also busy with their schedules,and sometimes they might not give u a complement teaching and guiding.Tutors are not like friends,we can ask for help from frineds by random.