2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(22):本校食堂

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Dear Mr. Principal, I am a senior student of our school. I’d like to say something about the canteen service in our school. In general, we enjoy in the canteen because of the good enviroment, the delicious dishes and the friendly service. However,I think it includes some promble should be improved.Fristly,The price of the food is high Yours Sincerely , Li Hua