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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(22):本校食堂

发布时间:2014-08-29 18:04浏览次数:398
要求:
任务型写作
请根据以下任务说明和写作要求,写一篇100--120词的英语短文。
假如你是李华,请就本校食堂服务(canteen service)的状况给校长写一封信。内容包括:
优点 不足 建议
食堂干净 价格偏高 尽快解决问题
饭菜可口 种类偏少
服务态度好 等候时间较长
开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Mr. Principal,
I am a senior student of our school. I’d like to say something about the canteen service in our school.
__________________________________
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文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分学术词汇;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

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