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2011年8月27日雅思写作真题:政府是否应向当地电影业提供经济支持

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:39浏览次数:1554
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Nowadays, people all over the world prefer to watch foreign films much more than the locally produced ones. Why is this the case? Should the government give financial support to the local film industry?

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Today, it is not uncommon for us to hear such kind of news that a new film has earned a large sum of money on the first day of its putting on the show. It seems that foreign films are extreamly good at creating such wander. For not only Chinese favoriate foreign films, But also people from all over the world do so. Dispite the popularity brought by these films, they also bring a great deal of profit to the foreign film companies. Apparently, there are plenty of reasons for foreign films to be so successful. First, the foreign film industry is very mature. There is a very clear division of labour. If you want to produce a film, you can quickly assemble a bounch of people, editors, directors, actors, photographers and so on. There is no shortage of content. Second, capital involment is an other important reason, they ensure big movie will finally go on display instead of running out money. However, we need to realize that a mature and successful film industry depends on many factors. It is not just a matter of money. There are plenty of cases that a small investment end up with a very popular film. It would be better for the maket, instead of goverment, to decide which part of the local film industry should be financially supported.

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