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As the earliest center of education and research,Peking University gather the best specialists as well as scholars ,consistently engaged itself in pioneering and development endeavors, in order to get the high level scientific research achievement and propel the high level education of China through cultivating high qualified talent .From a hundred years,the nowadays students centered with Peking University,play an pioneer role in history of modernization,forming honorable revolution and better academic tradition.
