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As the earliest center of education and research,Peking University gather the best specialists as well as scholars,has consistently engaged itself in pioneering and development endeavors, with a large amount of high-level scientific research achievements produced by talents trained there,PekingUnivesity has provided a strong impetus to the development of China's higher education system.OVer the past a hundred years,a bunch of modern Chinese universities as represented by Peking University have spearheaded China's historical advancement towards modernization and have formed a glorious revolution and academic tradition. .