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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10547
要求:
题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
评语:

文章衔接手法恰当;丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;请注意分段;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。

用户练习作文:

As the earliest center of education and research,Peking University gather the best specialists as well as scholars,has consistently engaged itself in pioneering and development endeavors, with a large amount of high-level scientific research achievements produced by talents trained there,PekingUnivesity has provided a strong impetus to the development of China's higher education system.OVer the past a hundred years,a bunch of modern Chinese universities as represented by Peking University have spearheaded China's historical advancement towards modernization and have formed a glorious revolution and academic tradition. .

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