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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用。
sometimes，we should pay the money in order to supply some chance to prove us, i think we should consume some money. i have read a story sometime before. there are three student who are good friends. when they graduated from college, the first rent a apartment the rent of which is high, but the rent supply TV, fridge, washer and so on. the second rent a common room with other one and the rent of the room is on average level. the third rent a cheap room in a district where poor people live. many years later, the first is a manager whose income is several million, the second is a common worker. the third still live in the poor district and marry a poor man. so i think if we consume some money which can prove us sometimes, we should consume without hesitation.
