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字数：300 满分：100分
有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇。
Sometimes，we should pay the money. In order to create chances to prove us, i think we should consume some money. I have read a story sometime before. There are three students who are good friends. when they graduated from college, the first rent a apartment the rent of which is high, but the apartment supplys TV, fridge, washer and so on. The second rent a common room with other one person and the rent of the room is on average level. The third rent a cheap room in a district where poor people live. Many years later, the first is a manager whose income is several million dollars, and the second is a common worker. The third still live in the poor district and marry a poor man. So i think if we consume some money which can prove us sometimes, we should consume without hesitation.
