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字数：300 满分：100分
有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了。
Sometimes，we should pay the money. In order to improve us, I think we should consume some money to create chances. I have read a story sometime before. There are three students who are good friends. When they graduated from college, the first rent an apartment the rent of which is high, but the apartment supplies TV, fridge, washer and so on. The second rent a common room with other one person and the rent of the room is on average level. The third rent a cheap room in a district where poor people live. Many years later, the first is a manager whose income is several million dollars, and the second is a common worker. The third still live in the poor district and marry a poor man. If we can improve us with some money, we should consume the money without hesitation.
