作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。
It is not sensible to make a conclusion according to what you saw and heard without a second thought. Nowadays people are so easy to get plenty of information through the social tools. You can have a look at others' comments and thoughts any time you are available. But sometimes it is a mess causing people lazy to think by themselves. The education in university emphasizes the importance of independent thinking. Whhen a person can judge a thing from his own aspect, he will have the ability and courage to address other incidents, even emergencies.
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