托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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i think the point that snap judgments can never be trust meets my thinking.sometimes we achieve emotionally and make decisions without thinking more.in that case,the judgments we made may be wrong or not that right. we human all like pretty things,we love beautiful views,charming boys and girl,amazing jewlerys.everything leaves a first impresssion on us.attractive things hooked us,but we may find they are not as perfect as we think at the first sight.for example,you fall in love with a girl just because of her pretty appearance,but later you find that the girl is picky,restless,arrogant,you want to leave her and you never think she is attracted.so above all,a snap judgment can not be trusted at all.